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The midnight train rumbles through town, echoing loneliness, then it is gone along a western track where dreams of yesterday reside. My love, do you also lie sleepless contemplating echoes?

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Date: 2/18/2024 3:20:00 PM
I love the Sijo form and your poem is a magnificent example of a well-written one. The melancholic tone adds meaning and depth to your words. Loved 'where dreams of yesterday reside. Nicely done...have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Chetta Achara
Date: 2/18/2024 5:41:00 PM
Thank upu. Sijo is one of favorite poetic forms. I should write more of it.

Book: Shattered Sighs