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The midnight train rumbles through town echoing loneliness, then it is gone along a western track where dreams of yesterday reside. My love, do you also lie sleepless contemplating echoes?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/18/2018 10:06:00 PM
Beautiful!
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Date: 4/18/2018 6:38:00 PM
wow, I love this. I wanted to check out if you prefer sijo with this number of lines and I see you seem to by how you did your poem here. Beautiful.
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Date: 4/16/2018 3:09:00 PM
Very nice!
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Date: 4/16/2018 2:48:00 PM
Sweet and romantic (possibly anyway), Deborah. Love it.
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