Connections

The midnight train rumbles through town
          echoing loneliness,
then it is gone along a western track
          where dreams of yesterday reside.
My love, do you also lie sleepless
          contemplating echoes?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 10:06 PM
Beautiful!
Dietrich Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 6:38 PM
wow, I love this. I wanted to check out if you prefer sijo with this number of lines and I see you seem to by how you did your poem here. Beautiful.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 3:09 PM
Very nice!
Gauthier Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 2:48 PM
Sweet and romantic (possibly anyway), Deborah. Love it.
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