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Honourable Mention

Brian Strand's Poetry Contest

Judged: 4th April, 2025

hand in mine feels fine 
as pearls nestled in oysters 
the comfort of home

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2025 12:54:00 PM

VERY nice.

Trina Layne
Date: 4/3/2025 4:26:00 PM

Thanks Andrea :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/2/2025 2:32:00 AM

Ahh!! Romantic. I enjoyed this one. Sara K

Trina Layne
Date: 4/2/2025 5:40:00 AM

Thank you, Sara. Yes. It is. It is one of my favorites too.

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 4/1/2025 5:39:00 PM

Very nice haiku. Like how it all blends together from line to line

Trina Layne
Date: 4/2/2025 5:41:00 AM

:). Appreciated Oliver.