Connected To the News Drip, Brian's Spaces Form In Broken Monoku

Drink deeply, feel not shame, as many have thirst- Who among us can deny such a right? 03/16/13

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/31/2013 5:01:00 PM

thought I'd peek at this one and I really like it!

James Peranteau

Date: 3/19/2013 3:50:00 AM

I for my part, deny no soul....'cept'n Noah ! *smiles* No caffeine, no artificial flavors or coloring or preservatives, and no spirits ! I commented on your blog from June this morning dear poet....a wonderful treat this morning to read! Have a wonderful week my friend....much love, james

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/16/2013 5:38:00 PM

I would have said ...... give water to those who are thirsty .... - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

James Marshall Goff
Date: 3/16/2013 7:58:00 PM

Thanks Anne, citizens have the right to honest news, not the poison tainting the water!