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At a special request, this is a sequel to my poem about two poeple meeting in a dream... if anyone wants a three-quel, I'm happy to oblige :-D :-D :-D

Connected In Their Dreams - Part 2

They met again in dreams last night
Amidst the hazy hue
Smiling and holding hands
On that bench made just for two...

As she spotted a pair of swans
Beneath the willows, she sighed.
She caught him smiling down at her
From the corner of her eye.

To fight off her self-consciousness 
She grabbed his coat and ran.
He signalled her to give it back.
She called, "Catch it if you can!"

She flung it in the air.
There came a sudden gust.
His coat became a kite to wind
And flew over the bush!

Little Miss Mischief froze in shock
And he laughed at this change.
She thought it would frustrate him -
When it didn't, she found it strange.

Where on earth did that go?
They saw his coat bubble on the water.
She saw what he was thinking
And to run, she felt she ought to.

He was just too fast for her.
He wrapped one arm around her waist.
After catching her legs with the the other,
He headed back towards the lake in haste.

He warned, "You're gonna have to swim for it!"
As he pretended to chuck her in.
Through her squeals and laughter 
She lied, "Wait! I can't swim!"

"I'm good at getting people back"
He chuckled out his mysterious gloat
While stretching out a branch he found
To catch his soggy coat.

She felt nervous and excited
And felt tempted to test the limits...
But her alarm rang through the dream 
She wanted five more minutes!
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Daniel Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 1:35 AM
Great story, off to read the other parts, Natasha😊
Scragg Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 2:39 AM
Thanks Joanna, ☺️ happy that they are being enjoyed 😉 ✨️
Crandall Avatar
August 3, 2026 at 9:21 PM
Cute - I'm following along eagerly! But, when it starts to get really good - poof!
Scragg Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 5:02 AM
Lol, thanks David. There's three more parts... still tryin' to figure out part six... thinking maybe visiting a land with interesting creatures and exploring the land together 😄😉 but still letting my mind muse for a while on it. So pleased the dream series is being enjoyed. It started off as a random poem, ones have asked for more, so I'm really happy to keep the story going 🤩 plus, its a handy back up for when I get writers block 😉✨️
Edmonds  Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 2:21 AM
Another wonderful dream… Beryl
Scragg Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 2:56 AM
Thank you, they are fun to write 😊 Gets the imagination flowing ✍️🌸
Goldsmith Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 2:03 PM
Thanks for part 2... Another creative write you have here. Love It... Yes, I would read a part 3. Thanks for the pin. I hate when a great dream ends. I wonder why it does???? Maybe deal with that if you do a part 3. Great last line. Oh yes, just five more minutes. Have a fun day writing away..........
Scragg Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 6:07 PM
Thanks Paula, and for the prompt to do a sequel! :-D .... the poem ends with the dream interrupted as a reflection of the reality we face when we are enjoying a dream and the frustration of not knowing what happens next... a request has been made to keep the dreams going so more are on the way.... well, when I know what I'm going to write lol :-D
Gibbons Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 2:05 AM
Wow genius at work natasha I think you should keep dream going hotter n hotter n hotter LOL then make a book of continued dream I buy it anyone else wanna buy it. Hugzzz <3
Scragg Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 3:48 AM
Have you noticed, with dreams, they always cut off just when you are gripped and want to see what happens next?? ... hopefully the poems will keep doing that... lol xx
Cunningham Avatar
July 27, 2026 at 11:20 PM
Another romantic gem Natasha, you write these so well. Tom
Scragg Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 3:46 AM
Thank you :-D
Smith  Avatar
July 27, 2026 at 5:18 PM
Yes let this dream continue.
Scragg Avatar
July 27, 2026 at 6:27 PM
:-D ... do I take that as a request for part three then? ... lol :-D ... Thanks Alison, pleased you are enjoying the dream x
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