Congratulations You Won the Drawing

When we were young and pregnant we were poor.
My husband had three jobs, and I was trying to conserve money.
He wanted me to buy some maternity clothes from a store.
I refused. Store-bought clothes are too expensive!

He insisted, but the clothes seemed way overpriced.
We went to a maternity shop and I was horrified at the prices.
He picked out some things and begged me to try them on.
I reluctantly bought two whole outfits, feeling guilty.

About two weeks later the shop lady called us.
“Congratulations!” She said. “You won the drawing.”
I vaguely remembered her begging me to enter the drawing.
I had won a baby bath; I thanked her and said I would come pick it up. 

“Oh, honey, you cannot pick it up,” she told me. 
“You have won a top-of-the-line brand new maple baby bed; a crib.”
I thought she had said “baby bath.”  I was stunned.
Knowing now why she insisted I enter the drawing.
This was almost fifty years ago, and I have never forgotten this kindness.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 9/19/2021 6:53:00 PM
Can't help but ask...do you still have it?
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/20/2021 10:57:00 AM
No I gave it to a teacher friend about ten years ago because she had a new grandbaby and no money.
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