Pat Adams Poet Acrostic

Confusion Dies

(Acrostic)
Can't you see me I'm right here
Once so close now no where near
Never thought it'd end like this
Friendship tossed in the abyss
Underneath this steel facade
Sadly confused on I plod
In a door then out once more
Only time has made us quit
Not at once but bit by bit

Doors I dare open to peek
Invite light of hope I seek
Excited that this is why
Shadows of confusion die

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Cheryl Hoffman October 7, 2017 at 8:05 AM Very nice deep but optimistic acrostic Pat!~Che :) Pat Adams October 7, 2017 at 3:16 PM Thanks Cheryl! Very astute observation actually. I wrote the first part quite a while ago but thought it was way too dark. Recently I added the "dies" part to "kill off" the first part and ironically make it more "upbeat"....anyway I do appreciate the comment............80).........Pat

Jan Allison October 6, 2017 at 1:13 PM a very deep acrostic Pat I am far more used to your humourous poems but this was a wonderful rhyming acrostic poem:-) hugs jan xx Pat Adams October 6, 2017 at 7:48 PM Well, thank you Jan, I think we have that in common, although your departures are much more fluid than mine...........80)...Pat

Tim Smith October 6, 2017 at 11:03 AM Wonderful acrostic Pat Pat Adams October 6, 2017 at 1:06 PM Thank you Tim...............80)