Confusion

You are so mean
You confuse the hell out of me
Things are good
Then things are bad
We go up
Then we go down
Everything is fine
Then everything changes
I wish it wasn't up to me
I wish you would just go
But when you go...
I wish you confused the hell out of me
I wish things were good
Then things were bad
I wish we went up
Then we go down
I wish everything was fine
Then everything changes
I wish it was up to me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
April 29, 2009 at 4:01 PM
sounds like the man has control issues and loves seeing you"jump" "react" the power he has over your emotions perhaps...stop reacting...give no response. Light & Love
Bickerstaffe Avatar
April 29, 2009 at 7:56 AM
Welcome to the Soup Mande! Your short staccato phrasing is very effective! Well done my dear! Best wishes, Keith
Loveless Avatar
April 29, 2009 at 7:34 AM
Very powerfull, really greate write!
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
April 28, 2009 at 4:11 PM
Mande, The circle of life....with ups and downs round and around... Nice write. Keep Writing. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Lovingly, Dane
Kroeger Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 10:10 AM
Great.
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