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Confusion

You are so mean You confuse the hell out of me Things are good Then things are bad We go up Then we go down Everything is fine Then everything changes I wish it wasn't up to me I wish you would just go But when you go... I wish you confused the hell out of me I wish things were good Then things were bad I wish we went up Then we go down I wish everything was fine Then everything changes I wish it was up to me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/29/2009 4:01:00 PM
sounds like the man has control issues and loves seeing you"jump" "react" the power he has over your emotions perhaps...stop reacting...give no response. Light & Love
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Date: 4/29/2009 7:56:00 AM
Welcome to the Soup Mande! Your short staccato phrasing is very effective! Well done my dear! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 4/29/2009 7:34:00 AM
Very powerfull, really greate write!
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Date: 4/28/2009 4:11:00 PM
Mande, The circle of life....with ups and downs round and around... Nice write. Keep Writing. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 4/27/2009 10:10:00 AM
Great.
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