Confusing

its confusing.... its confsing to be here. its confusing o be there its hard to fing love. its hard to find that specil dove. why am i confused? why do i need to choose?

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Beata Agustin

Date: 3/22/2024 6:08:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/7/2016 2:48:00 AM

DEBBIE, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 9/12/2015 7:56:00 AM

Debbie,, awesome write! I enjoyed reading this poem. Skat

Briana Lynn Minard-Adler

Date: 3/8/2013 12:14:00 PM

I feel your pain, I feel the same.

Briana Lynn Minard-Adler

Date: 3/8/2013 12:09:00 PM

I feel your pain, I feel the same.

Bradley Cox

Date: 2/11/2013 11:18:00 PM

that was awesome, rhymed well, thank you for sharing

Ken Casey

Date: 1/22/2010 7:30:00 AM

we at times are faced by choices we cant stando make but much like your words in thiswrite although confussed you are strong and will make that decision in your own time great work on this write