Confusing

its confusing....
its confsing to be here.
its confusing o be there
its hard to fing love.
its hard to find that specil dove.
why am i confused?
why do i need to choose?

depressioni do not know?

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Beata Agustin

March 22, 2024 at 6:08 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

February 7, 2016 at 2:48 AM

DEBBIE, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

September 12, 2015 at 7:56 AM

Debbie,, awesome write! I enjoyed reading this poem. Skat

Briana Lynn Minard-Adler

March 8, 2013 at 12:14 PM

I feel your pain, I feel the same.

Briana Lynn Minard-Adler

March 8, 2013 at 12:09 PM

I feel your pain, I feel the same.

Bradley Cox

February 11, 2013 at 11:18 PM

that was awesome, rhymed well, thank you for sharing

Ken Casey

January 22, 2010 at 7:30 AM

we at times are faced by choices we cant stando make but much like your words in thiswrite although confussed you are strong and will make that decision in your own time great work on this write

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