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Confused Within Reality

Caught up in dreams confused within reality, within this dream I can not be set free. Frustrations leak through my head Unrecognizable feelings with thoughts of dread. Words can not explain my temptations of regret. Utilizing fractions of words can comprehend, I'll never begin to see the end. Failure streams as thoughts collapse Structure leads within a process to relapse. Shadows render my excistance. Its impossible to explain a sentence.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/9/2011 8:25:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Joshua. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Joshua Rawls
Date: 9/13/2011 3:32:00 PM
thank you!
Date: 9/8/2011 11:33:00 PM
WELCOME TO POETRY SOUP.. ENJOYED READING YOUR CREATIVE WRITE TONIGHT..ENJOY THE SITE WITH ITS MANY FEATURES AS U SHARE WORDS WITH LUV...
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