Confused

I'm starting slowly to be confused I'm believing this life has no use This pation is wasted in the wind This love is chasing hopes from dust Those thoughts are torturing me so fast Those dreams are bringing my world to the end...

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Beata Agustin

Date: 12/5/2024 1:45:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/7/2016 10:23:00 AM

WELL DONE. LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/12/2016 2:43:00 PM

Hi Dana, this is an awesome poem. Love SKAT

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/7/2009 6:47:00 PM

I hear you...Light & Love