Confused

I'm starting slowly to be confused
I'm believing this life has no use
This pation is wasted in the wind
This love is chasing hopes from dust
Those thoughts are torturing me so fast
Those dreams are bringing my world to the end...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Agustin Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 1:45 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 10:23 AM
WELL DONE. LINDA
A  Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 2:43 PM
Hi Dana, this is an awesome poem. Love SKAT
Guzzi Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 6:47 PM
I hear you...Light & Love
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