Confronting shadows

Why can't I walk in the garden at night?
Horrible shadows keep blurring my sight ~
They make me run like a man with no balls.
Each time I trip and get bruised from my falls.

These shadows whisper cold fears in my ear,
Now I understand the songs sung by fear,
Yet I must confront these fiery shadows,
But each new night, fresh darkness runs the shows.

Though I'm a child and children fear the dark,
Since most darkness are silent, still, and stark.
That's why my shadows I must now confront.
The trepidation they bring, I must hunt.

Tonight is the night I'll set myself free,
From my whole life, fiery shadows must flee.
Yet I still fear walking in the garden,
But from these hauntings, I seek a pardon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Ibeh Avatar
July 19, 2025 at 6:05 PM
Maclawrence, heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this marvelous piece. I love your 2nd stanza. I enjoyed reading. Bravo!
Famuyiwa Avatar
July 19, 2025 at 7:40 PM
I appreciate your comment.
Dietrich Avatar
July 8, 2025 at 1:09 PM
you did the theme very differently from me. That's what makes poetry so fun, how we interpret so many things in different ways
Famuyiwa Avatar
July 8, 2025 at 2:41 PM
Just read yours too. That's the flexibility use of words in English language.
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