Confined to a Screen

      A mind confined to a screen
         running on fumes and caffeine

      Sight, smells, sounds, sterile become
         old age, like unto death, her victims numb
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Greenhough Avatar
August 18, 2025 at 12:16 PM
Today's addiction is electronics. I like the message. I wish you hadn't mentioned caffeine-now I want a cup of coffee.
Wolf Avatar
August 18, 2025 at 8:34 PM
Have a cup of java instead. lol. ~ Cro-Magnon Man
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 4:45 PM
this topic is my 'soap box.' Those mind-numbing screens are destroying human interaction...enough said for now!
Wolf Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 7:51 PM
Can't blame you, Sara. Other than poetry soup, I spend zero time on screens every day. Don't even use a smart phone. ~ Luddite Louie
Goldsmith Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 1:28 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful and true write. Now for a funny write??? Need a laugh or two.... Have a fun day/week writing away..........
Wolf Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 7:52 PM
Hurt my funnybone last week, Paula. Still recovering. lol. ~ gw
Velasco Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 9:29 AM
Such a striking piece, Gershon!
Maverick Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 11:13 PM
A hellish concept i find in these lines..To every Thing a season.' We all come to our time.'
Wolf Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 7:50 PM
'Heckish," I say. Tee-hee
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