Russell Sivey Poet Rhyme

Confined Into a Circle

A woman confined into a circle of her life
Was drawn into the sure simplicity of a swish
Her being was brought into the very form she is
She has the insight to step into life with a flourish

Her soul belongs within the boundaries here inside
Nothing more pure infects this space than her very instinct
Now she politely absorbs the peace that is in the air
Which makes her proud, joyful, and truly very distinct

The woman gleams with pleasure
The aforethought reigns supreme
She lives within the circle
And love is all of her dream

Russell Sivey

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Charmaine Chircop January 21, 2013 at 11:59 AM Soo soo beautifully penned Russell

Don Johnson January 20, 2013 at 11:18 PM yes thats how it is Russell mate, you covered it well id state...

Sara Kendrick January 20, 2013 at 2:34 PM Interesting work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Your reading of my work is always very encouraging..Sara

Demetrios Trifiatis January 20, 2013 at 1:54 PM Dear Russel, some happy woman she is finding the harmony In her soul. Love is the only thing we all must need, this will suffice for our life. Excellent verse! Thank you! Sorry, before I pasted the wrong comment

Demetrios Trifiatis January 20, 2013 at 12:45 PM Dear Lucilla, Let your poem be a monument for her to commemorate her passage from this fleeting world! God bless her soul and God bless you.

Lucilla Carrillo January 20, 2013 at 11:13 AM For some men it is hard to write about women, but you do it just fine. Thanks for sharing this wonderfut peice. check out your SoupMail later. Thanks for reading my poem. Lucilla

Richard Lamoureux January 20, 2013 at 10:38 AM Thanks Russell for choosing my poem and for running an interesting contest. I had wanted to change my entry to my more recent poem "Poetry" but I was to late. If you have a chance to read it I would be honored. Take care Russell.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 20, 2013 at 10:31 AM This is a beautiful write Russell the more I read it the better it gets xx

Richard Lamoureux January 20, 2013 at 10:12 AM Women are truly Wonderful beyond description. This is certainly a good starting point. I enjoyed your Poem Russell.