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Confined Into a Circle

A woman confined into a circle of her life Was drawn into the sure simplicity of a swish Her being was brought into the very form she is She has the insight to step into life with a flourish Her soul belongs within the boundaries here inside Nothing more pure infects this space than her very instinct Now she politely absorbs the peace that is in the air Which makes her proud, joyful, and truly very distinct The woman gleams with pleasure The aforethought reigns supreme She lives within the circle And love is all of her dream
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/21/2013 11:59:00 AM
Soo soo beautifully penned Russell
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Date: 1/20/2013 11:18:00 PM
yes thats how it is Russell mate, you covered it well id state...
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Date: 1/20/2013 2:34:00 PM
Interesting work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Your reading of my work is always very encouraging..Sara
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Date: 1/20/2013 1:54:00 PM
Dear Russel, some happy woman she is finding the harmony In her soul. Love is the only thing we all must need, this will suffice for our life. Excellent verse! Thank you! Sorry, before I pasted the wrong comment
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Date: 1/20/2013 12:45:00 PM
Dear Lucilla, Let your poem be a monument for her to commemorate her passage from this fleeting world! God bless her soul and God bless you.
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Date: 1/20/2013 11:13:00 AM
For some men it is hard to write about women, but you do it just fine. Thanks for sharing this wonderfut peice. check out your SoupMail later. Thanks for reading my poem. Lucilla
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Date: 1/20/2013 10:38:00 AM
Thanks Russell for choosing my poem and for running an interesting contest. I had wanted to change my entry to my more recent poem "Poetry" but I was to late. If you have a chance to read it I would be honored. Take care Russell.
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Date: 1/20/2013 10:31:00 AM
This is a beautiful write Russell the more I read it the better it gets xx
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Date: 1/20/2013 10:12:00 AM
Women are truly Wonderful beyond description. This is certainly a good starting point. I enjoyed your Poem Russell.
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