Erin S Poet Rhyme

Confidant

Your disguise is perfect and given off with style
If only he had known when you were coming down the aisle

A secret spilled that would inflict nothing but pain
The revolution I feel for you I can hardly contain

With a laugh and a smile you reveal a broken promise
The day you lit the fire and began it with a kiss

Lying is not the only thing you did with your mouth that day
Thoughts of him and your children keep me from giving it all away

Go on and pretend to live in your fantasy dream
For in time the haze will disperse and reveal your vile scheme

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Natalie The Rogue Rhymer September 15, 2012 at 11:25 AM Wow Erin-Powerful stuff here. I think I 'got' this. If so, clever, clever.

Andrea Dietrich September 14, 2012 at 7:01 PM another nice one here as well. I liked the references to the mouth. The smile, kiss and lying with the mouth.

Erin S September 11, 2012 at 10:29 PM Thank you everyone for your comments! ^_^ I'm always glad to hear when others enjoy my poetry.

Richard Palmer September 11, 2012 at 6:11 PM nice write Erin,it is always just a matter of time,whats in the dark always comes to light

Jon A Cavanaugh September 11, 2012 at 10:33 AM I like the development of your poem. And I especially love poems that rhyme. I would suggest that you work on the meter of the poem to give it a smother flow. Please don't take offense. I know that someone as eloquent as yourself can polish this poem into a masterpiece that is why I'm making this suggestion.

David Scott September 10, 2012 at 1:48 PM i know how you feel i wrote one called devious her name about an ex of mine who was scheaming game playing and a lier i like your wording xx davidscott