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Confessions of a Young Mind

I see you walking past And looking in my direction We say hi here and there But both to shy to say anymore You probably like me as much as I like you But both of us too scared to tell each other I believe you are the one That God has sent to me But when I do say more All you can say is hi as you look to the floor Couldn’t even look me in the eye But later you tell me all you do is cry I am now lost through all your emotions and feelings Not knowing what to do or say I picture different ways I can ask you But I keep changing my mind and never get the chance to So maybe you weren’t that person That God had assigned to me But you are that person Who confessed that you always loved me © Jeremy Fennell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/22/2010 10:53:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jeremy. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/21/2010 4:32:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with its creative theme... hopoe your time on Soup will be special and fun as u enjoy a Happy Thanksgiving with luv..
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