Rushda R Poet Haiku

Confessions In the Rain

impassioned sky mumbles tasteless rain
a soaking measly carapace collects  muddy remains
weather overbears a confessing cloud.



For Carol Brown's 'Nature comes to life' Contest.

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Kash Poet March 1, 2011 at 7:13 AM Nice Haiku here!Congrats Rushda on your HM win----kashinath

Rushda R February 28, 2011 at 9:13 PM Fondest love for all the wishes.

Andrea Dietrich February 28, 2011 at 8:56 PM Rushda, congrats on your HM.

Dr.Ram Mehta February 28, 2011 at 1:13 PM Congratulation on this HM win in the contest of Carol, Rushda

Sharon Ruebel February 28, 2011 at 10:45 AM Hello Rushda, Congratulations on your wonderful poem this has such depth about it. Enjoyed reading this today As Always, Shar

John Freeman February 28, 2011 at 10:32 AM Beautiful job Rushda! It's so great to see your success. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored success in Carol's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 28, 2011 at 7:35 AM Congrats Rushda on your HM in Carol's contest for this elegant entry .. enjoy your special honor with luv..

Tahera Mannan February 28, 2011 at 7:12 AM Beautiful confessions.Many congratulations for this win.

Carol Sunshine Brown February 28, 2011 at 6:22 AM Congratulations on your very deserving win in my contest Rushda. This was a hard contest for me to judge. Thank you for supporting my contest another will begin soon. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich February 27, 2011 at 12:44 AM Hello, Rushda. I like that "weather overbears" phrase a lot. Good luck in thec contest.LUv, Andrea

Francine Roberts February 24, 2011 at 9:49 PM this is lovely but the syllable count is supposed to be 5=7=5 for a haiku for Carols contest, just a heads up