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Confessions In the Rain

impassioned sky mumbles tasteless rain a soaking measly carapace collects muddy remains weather overbears a confessing cloud. For Carol Brown's 'Nature comes to life' Contest.

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Kash Poet

Date: 3/1/2011 7:13:00 AM

Nice Haiku here!Congrats Rushda on your HM win----kashinath

Rushda R

Date: 2/28/2011 9:13:00 PM

Fondest love for all the wishes.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/28/2011 8:56:00 PM

Rushda, congrats on your HM.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/28/2011 1:13:00 PM

Congratulation on this HM win in the contest of Carol, Rushda

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/28/2011 10:45:00 AM

Hello Rushda, Congratulations on your wonderful poem this has such depth about it. Enjoyed reading this today As Always, Shar

John Freeman

Date: 2/28/2011 10:32:00 AM

Beautiful job Rushda! It's so great to see your success. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored success in Carol's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/28/2011 7:35:00 AM

Congrats Rushda on your HM in Carol's contest for this elegant entry .. enjoy your special honor with luv..

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/28/2011 7:12:00 AM

Beautiful confessions.Many congratulations for this win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/28/2011 6:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your very deserving win in my contest Rushda. This was a hard contest for me to judge. Thank you for supporting my contest another will begin soon. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2011 12:44:00 AM

Hello, Rushda. I like that "weather overbears" phrase a lot. Good luck in thec contest.LUv, Andrea

Francine Roberts

Date: 2/24/2011 9:49:00 PM

this is lovely but the syllable count is supposed to be 5=7=5 for a haiku for Carols contest, just a heads up