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Confession To a Bartender

He would sit on the same stool everyday And watch, as I tended bar Conversation flowing between us As I kept refreshing his jar At the end of my shift, I’d sit with him And we’d put the world to right Forgetting the world around us Talking ‘til well into night Days became weeks, weeks became months Our friendship growing strong Then one day he made the confession That his heart, to me, did belong That we were meant to be together Since the day I walked into his life And down on one knee, he asked me If I would consider becoming his wife Although now passed on, I couldn’t have asked For a husband more loving, or tender Or the twenty five years of wedded bliss From his ‘Confession to a bartender’. For Natalie The Rogue Rhymer's contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/15/2011 7:51:00 PM
I am entranced by this confession of love found in the most amazing places. So happy for you and loved reading this wonderful verse! :)
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Date: 11/8/2011 3:22:00 PM
very deepen by this one keep it up
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Date: 11/1/2011 8:39:00 PM
I want to know.Is this true? Anyway, it's sure nice to think so. Loved your comment on my cat in the last poem you saw of mine!
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Janette Fisher
Date: 11/2/2011 4:42:00 AM
Hi Andrea - yes this is all true - it was one of the best jobs I've ever done and not just because it was how I met my beloved Billy - I did it for 8 years and I thoroughly loved every minute. Thanks for the comment
Date: 11/1/2011 2:46:00 PM
Janette, your lovely poem brought tears to my eyes. I hope you will be surrounded by other family over the holiday. This truly is an outstanding poem and well deserving of a win. Blessings and love to you, Carolyn
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Date: 11/1/2011 1:44:00 PM
Wishing you the best in the contest with this one.
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Date: 11/1/2011 7:39:00 AM
The best to you in the contest Janette. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/31/2011 5:41:00 PM
Happy for you. A bar is where one meets people.
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