Confession and Admission

Confession and admission 
                                  sometimes resembles near about the same
                                           So what do I name for a deed 
                                           I did earlier when I was young 
                                            A girl loved me much and I too
                                    but neither I met her nor she in any day
                                            She knew I am a married man
                                          her style attitudes attracted me
                                             I knew there's no sin to love
                                      so I loved her much very much simply
                                             Many years gone on the way
                                             I told her indirectly about me 
                                        that I am helpless can do nothing
                                     After a long period she is now married
                                           I admit that I still love her really
                                 I confess that I lost her valuable time for love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 2:39 PM
BL, I am sure this happens to many people. but I am glad that you missed the opportunity and stayed true to your mate. You did the right thing!!
Devnath  Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 2:55 PM
Thanks for praising me with comment. Loved always, bl
Rutherford Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 12:36 PM
Bl, Some things are never ment to happen . Sad and profound write. Anne
Devnath  Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 12:43 PM
Many thanks my friend for your nice comment. Loved always, bl
Carrillo Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 12:05 PM
WOW! This is some conffession. Only God knows why things happen. Sometimes things are not meant to be. Thanks for answering my question. I only had one daughter and God knows that I love her dearly, but she messed up her life. She is just now turning her life around and for that I'm greatful..... Lucilla
Devnath  Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 8:56 AM
My lovely friend, thanks a lot for your comment. God always bless your family all the time. Loved always, bl
Onclaud Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 11:01 AM
beautiful descriptions with amazing imagery, bl... this is such a fresh nostalgic write; I enjoyed it a lot---sad yet lovely... :) huggs
Devnath  Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 11:08 AM
Thanks a lot for stopping by on my write. Loved always, bl
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