Confession

in the stormy light
each lover hears confessions
the night rains passion


contest Get Romantic
visual 2
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Croft Avatar
April 29, 2024 at 8:13 PM
i loved this haiku!
Merryman Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 8:01 AM
Frederic, congrats on your wonderful win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
Alex Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 2:39 AM
Geat imagery. Beautiful Creation. Congratulations on your win!
Nance Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 5:35 PM
the night and your poem rains passion, good write and a nice win :)
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 9:45 PM
I love the intimacy of the passion in your haiku, Frederic...congrats on your win! Hugs, Rhonda
A  Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 6:18 PM
FREDERIC, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~
A   Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 11:56 AM
Frederic, Congratulations, a mighty romantic win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Allison Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 2:51 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Frederic:-) Hugs Jan xx
Shaw Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 12:26 PM
Congratulations Frederic! This is a delicate, intricate weave of love and passion. A favorite! Hugs, Kimberly
Lawless Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 8:04 AM
Frederic, I had to slow down and read the last line several time to allow its full romantic meaning to sink in and reveal its secret.
Chakrabarty Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 5:56 AM
Loved your idea on visual#2 Fred..a different take..beautiful. Congrats on win>>>>rajat
Dietrich Avatar
March 6, 2015 at 11:45 PM
I just loved the final line of this one. Also the idea of confessions in the storm! Very nicely done. Congrats to you.
Allison Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 7:00 PM
Very clever Haiku Frederic - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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