Conduit of Time

When the river flows,
The stream glows,
Down the watercourse,
Through the natural channel,
The earth becomes its force.
When the river flows,
Beneath the falling waterfall,
Their the light transcends,
The fine array of each watercolour
Like a artist using his pallet,
To create a masterpiece.
Where students learn,
How master's shine,
Their they stand in awe,
In a winters war,
Through the conduit of time.
The river flows, and goes further,
From once that river flowed, and came.
There the river flows,
There the river lives.




I had to take lines because I realised it was only 20 lines max! so it may not fit together.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Strand Avatar
January 8, 2010 at 12:01 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Andrew.Rgds Brian
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January 7, 2010 at 10:32 AM
Andrew, Wow! This will make a wonderful entry in Brian's contest. Best of luck!! I love this spiritual river. Thanks for your most welcome comments on sacred heart. Keep writing and I'll keep reading! Happy New Year to you. Love Light Patty
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January 7, 2010 at 9:26 AM
OH, don't you hate it when you go over on the lines and need to take things out! It was good to see you trying to make this more than just about a river. Love the flow of it, andrew, and thanks for commenting to me. Andrea ps Good luck in the contest!
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