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It's the time since feeling sandy grit scratch between my toes Transparently do I remember, although the years have flown Chilling memories sitting here, Ice cold and nervously alone Once a place was my escape, to flee a troubled home I never liked the water, even now that I am grown Only would I climb the rocks and carve my name in stone The sharp edges of a tortoiseshell, engraving with its bone Despite a life so undeserving, forgiveness I have shown But I shall never forget their malice, nor their actions will I condone

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Date: 10/19/2024 3:26:00 AM
Great write.. Your poem captures the complexity of dealing with past trauma, personal resilience, and the struggle between forgiveness and unresolved hurt. Through its rich nature symbolism and emotional honesty, it speaks to the difficulty of reconciling with painful memories while maintaining a sense of self.
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Julianne Williams
Date: 10/23/2024 11:09:00 AM
Wow. Thank you for a powerful response. Greatly appreciated. Xxx

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