Condemnation

I look at you in stark disgust
My 'gift' to you my lack of trust
In bitter taste of ash and dust
I ask you back away

In you a mirror's all I see
Returns the message back to me
A prison door without a key that
Blocks the light of day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kelly Avatar
January 15, 2009 at 1:41 PM
Yoni , you have managed a 1st class piece of poetic rhyme , here . They would make great lyrics . Well done .....
Bickerstaffe Avatar
January 15, 2009 at 7:41 AM
Cool rhyming and flow... excellent title; wonderful piece! Best wishes, Keith
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