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Condemnation

I look at you in stark disgust My 'gift' to you my lack of trust In bitter taste of ash and dust I ask you back away In you a mirror's all I see Returns the message back to me A prison door without a key that Blocks the light of day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/15/2009 1:41:00 PM
Yoni , you have managed a 1st class piece of poetic rhyme , here . They would make great lyrics . Well done .....
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Date: 1/15/2009 7:41:00 AM
Cool rhyming and flow... excellent title; wonderful piece! Best wishes, Keith
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