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Concrete

The flower sprouts up Among cold modern concrete And is crushed by all.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/4/2010 3:16:00 PM
Beautiful haiku. but it sounds like even a strong will can be crushed. Beautiful none the less. Love Destiny
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Date: 5/4/2010 4:13:00 AM
Nice haiku with good images
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Date: 5/3/2010 9:16:00 PM
yeah it's a common thing to happen, something so beautiful.. this goes two ways the flower its self or a person i suppose, a real deep write, nice one
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Date: 5/3/2010 9:10:00 PM
Very nice!
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