Concrete

The flower sprouts up
Among cold modern concrete
And is crushed by all.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Orschell Avatar
May 4, 2010 at 3:16 PM
Beautiful haiku. but it sounds like even a strong will can be crushed. Beautiful none the less. Love Destiny
Mehta Avatar
May 4, 2010 at 4:13 AM
Nice haiku with good images
A   Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 9:16 PM
yeah it's a common thing to happen, something so beautiful.. this goes two ways the flower its self or a person i suppose, a real deep write, nice one
Dyer Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 9:10 PM
Very nice!
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