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Vows that were meant till our dieing  days.suffer in the outcome of your deceitful ways.the depth of gut wrenching instinct a bond that's shattered never to be relinked. So its sinking in realisation of what's coming its hitting me full force and I can't stop running.results that end in years of lies sucked in again with your repeated disguise .dreams that turn into dust .reality when its not love without your sacred trust.like a single tear that keeps on pouring .sea of hurt two soul mates in mourning. Goodbye my best friend I'll miss you more than life .a future you chose without me as your wife
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March 29, 2016 at 8:21 AM
Hey Danielle :) - I welcome you to Poetry - Soup :) - Thank you for your first poem, I look forward to many, many more in the future :) - Have fun, meet many "poet" friends :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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March 26, 2016 at 3:23 AM
Danielle Waddell, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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March 23, 2016 at 4:37 AM
Danielle, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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