Concert

Fly away dear song
Drifting and fluttering on
To seek a new home

beautymusicsenryu

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Poet Destroyer A

April 18, 2015 at 5:13 PM

Here I am again, you did not offend me. I endured worse on this site.. LOL, The reason you haven't heard from me is because I'm out of town. I get internet every now and then. I would write to your inbox, but you have it off. LOL, are you afraid of mail. I sure hope not... Always ~LINDA~

Poet Destroyer A

April 18, 2015 at 5:11 PM

Hi Ronald, this is a nice way in getting your Senryu on :) Congrats on the win. LUV LINDA

Paul Callus

April 12, 2015 at 12:15 PM

You are no egoist, Ronald! Your willingness to share is very evident in this lovely senryu. Congrats on your win! // paul

Ronald Wheeler

April 12, 2015 at 9:41 PM

Thank you kindly dear sir.

Poet Destroyer A

April 12, 2015 at 3:30 AM

I'm not really a night owl. I drank a red bull... The Latest I stay up is 11... LOL, call me old school.... So did you ever find a way to comment my big foot poem. I'd like your take on it... Linda

Ronald Wheeler

April 12, 2015 at 4:50 AM

I just went ahead and resubmit that last poem. I apologize if I offended you. I really didn't mean it that way at all. After I'd entered it, I read it again and realized what an ass it made me look! lol And I did read your latest, but I'd be glad to read it again!

Poet Destroyer A

April 12, 2015 at 2:46 AM

Hello Ronald, glad you made your way to one of my old poems. I love that poem you just commented. Anyways, here I am again. Wide awake. LOL, this is a great senryu. Nice to see it made the senryu winning list. Linda

Ronald Wheeler

April 12, 2015 at 3:12 AM

Thank you my dear! Another night owl I see. About the senryu, it's kind of funny really. I just modified one of the characters lines from my novel : ) It worked, I guess?!