Concernment

Can it be
                                       with such subtilty
                                        You managed to
                                        thaw a once cold
                                          broken heart
                                      our new beginning
                                     the romantic ending
                                       Ah kiss to remind
                                      you're one of akind
                                       early evening skies
                                           just you and I
                                     sounds like something
                                        worth mentioning


                                              She loves me
                                             it's not just an 
                                       opportunity to be more
                                           than comfortable
                                              I love her
                                        these aren't just words
                                            She's sweet and
                                            we're compatible


                                            Aint got nobody
                                                 meddling
                                       there's no strays or riffs
                                     Darling it's just me and you
                                         there's a specail gift
                                          I just wanted to say
                                                 I thought
                                             I'd let you know


                                           The way I love you
                                               is really for you
                                            I thought I'd let you go


From Chapter 14 " Avoiding being Cockblocked"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 9/4/2024 10:54:00 AM
Hello Allan Terry. You love her yet you let her go!?!! Why? Is the romance over between the two of you? Enjoy your day my friend. Darlene/
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