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Concerning Character

There’s Who I am, What I’ve done,  And Where I want to be. And how I choose to view them each  Sets their priority. Just saying this is Who I am  Excusing What I’ve done Means Where I want to be remains The place where I’ve begun But if I say that What I’ve done shapes Who I am complete Then Where I want to be becomes A goal I cannot meet Yet knowing Where I want to be Without the other two Will leave me lost and wandering In deserts I’ve gone through Let What I’ve done be marker stones On pathways within me That guide me up  from Who I am  To Where I want to be 10/16/22 ER: Enlightenment Recovery Poetry Contest

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Date: 10/27/2022 10:24:00 AM
Excellent!!
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Date: 10/27/2022 10:24:00 AM
and a fave
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Jesse Rowe
Date: 10/27/2022 3:28:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 10/18/2022 1:01:00 AM
Brilliant!
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Jesse Rowe
Date: 10/18/2022 4:12:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 10/16/2022 6:39:00 AM
This is terrific, Jesse - I have not seen such before, with the repeat of the phrases like an extended refrain, but very clever, and very effective.
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Jesse Rowe
Date: 10/17/2022 10:51:00 AM
Thank you. Was trying to show different perspectives on the initial thought so I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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