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Concern

...inspired by 'Encounter' by Czeslaw Milosz The station wagon carried us through the misty morning. A sudden flash betrayed the rabbit. Its loping gait, gray to blend with the dawn, the creature clipped the churning wheels as my companion pointed, and was gone. Now gone forever. A memory only, the man and the animal, living in my dreams. Where did they go? Sound and sight consumed me. Concern occupied my thoughts. We traveled on.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/22/2012 9:50:00 PM
wow, just a little thing but it sparks the mind and stays there forever . I have a few memories like this one. Great poem, Keith.
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Date: 6/22/2012 2:49:00 PM
i can picture it all so vividly, especially the "misty morning." the ending is perfect - that's what happens; life goes on.
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Date: 6/22/2012 1:17:00 PM
Very well written Keith !!! :)
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