Concern

...inspired by 'Encounter' by Czeslaw Milosz


The station wagon carried us through the misty morning.
A sudden flash betrayed the rabbit.

Its loping gait, gray to blend with the dawn,
the creature clipped the churning wheels as my companion pointed,
and was gone.

Now gone forever. A memory only, the man and the animal,
living in my dreams.

Where did they go? 
Sound and sight consumed me.
Concern occupied my thoughts. We traveled on.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 9:50 PM
wow, just a little thing but it sparks the mind and stays there forever . I have a few memories like this one. Great poem, Keith.
Bauer Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 2:49 PM
i can picture it all so vividly, especially the "misty morning." the ending is perfect - that's what happens; life goes on.
Andresen Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 1:17 PM
Very well written Keith !!! :)
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