Bl Devnath Poet Senryu

Concept Evolves As a Whole

tough to adorn words 
                                             a picture of whole concept 
                                                  felt by sense with in

                                                  Sun is at eyes' sight
                                             concept evolves as a whole
                                                  words miss to depict

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Judy Konos May 17, 2013 at 9:03 AM Words Exception: "I Love You"...hard to look at a picture of that! Loved your Senryu Bl Devnath May 19, 2013 at 3:56 AM Thanks for your sweet comment. You have rightly said. Loved your comment much. Always.....,bl