Concentrations Loss

mind keeps falling prey
days past, great moments at play
a two coffee day!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Davis Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 8:48 AM
This is cute and clever. Sometimes we need that extra boost to start the day. Nice job
Kithinji Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 5:21 PM
Make that three!
Hapworth Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 6:49 AM
some days there is never enough ;)
Mehta Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 12:48 AM
Nice haiku with each clear expression, Adam
Hapworth Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 6:44 AM
Thank you :)
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