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i got thinking of all the drinks that killed thoughts locked in brain cells it's a fine line it's genocide a grey area of grey matter a matter of fact the barbed wire wrapped and worn around my head jesus by no means a crown of thorns more orna mental not a keep sake just a means of trying to stop pos sible thoughts from escaping but the ones that are con fined in mind are visually enigmatic and i should not see them so in turn they turn into the words of the script of the movie stalag seven teen

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Date: 12/4/2019 4:24:00 AM
More like Kelly's Heroes...During a thunderstorm in early September 1944, units of the 35th Infantry Division are nearing the French town of Nancy. One of the division's mechanized reconnaissance platoons is ordered to hold their position when the Germans counterattack. The outnumbered platoon also receives friendly fire from their own mortars.Private Kelly, a former lieutenant scapegoated for a failed infantry assault, captures Colonel Dankhopf of Wehrmacht Intelligence.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 12/4/2019 9:13:00 AM
Thank you Lady, but I know "Kelly's Heros". Originally I was thinking "Slaughterhouse Five", but then remembering of where "Hogan's Heros" began; and I started to think WOW I grew up watching a show where Nazis and detainment camps were funny. "Stalag 17" was a serious movie and I believe William Holden received an Oscar.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 12/4/2019 4:24:00 AM
...I can feel a story coming on.

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