Home » Poems » Abe Lopez » Concealing Heart

Concealing Heart

.




                                 keeper of secrets
                            intimate memoirs grinning
                                visceral hope chest





.

mysterypeoplesenryu

♡Like0

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

October 24, 2010 at 12:35 PM

Congrats Abe on your featured poem this week on the Soup. a great piece to share with us all my friend with luv...

Poet Destroyer A

October 21, 2010 at 7:58 AM

ABE, hello & Congratulations! On your awesome & well done poem being featured this week: ) have a nice one,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 19, 2010 at 9:40 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Abe. Love, Carol

Juan Paolo Galua

October 19, 2010 at 1:13 AM

Congratulations! this is intriguing for me...i have to search for that word visceral...lol

Carrie Richards

October 18, 2010 at 9:02 AM

Look who is featured this week!!! My friend, Abe!! Congratulations on this wonderful senryu, I've missed seeing your wonderful poetry! Hope you are well and all is going fine in Oklahoma!!! Take care, and my best to you and your family! ~ Carrie

John Freeman

October 17, 2010 at 5:57 PM

Big Congratulations Abe, on your worthy Senryu being the featured this week. Agape, Moses

Sara Kendrick

October 17, 2010 at 4:33 PM

Congratulations on being featured on home page this week..Sara

Daver Austin

March 22, 2010 at 6:25 AM

Yes! Who really knows what is in another's head? This is a great short write, Abe. Maybe I don't get the drift, but your senryu hits me in a number of mental places. Love, daver

Doris Culverhouse

March 22, 2010 at 3:32 AM

fine writing,

Anna-Marie Docherty

March 22, 2010 at 12:14 AM

Lovely Senryu write, so much said in so few words, well done! Thanks for your welcome comments, it's good to see you around! Anna-Marie.

March 5, 2010 at 1:34 PM

What an interesting perspective captured in just three lines. I really like the last line. If this is for the contest, best wishes. Keep on writing! Have a good weekend. Karen