Jatin Gauttam Poet Rhyme

Concealed Life

CONCEALED LIFE
Jatin Gauttam
June 10, 2013



Trying hard to conceal, what's mine....
You're snatching it away with bare hands...
It was my entire world, my life... 
Was safe.. unless you came engraved....

You can't understand the emotions, I'm fighting with...
You only trick, you're selfish..when you're in some need...
I uttered my faith in you, and lost my everything...
Someone stepped my shoulder, to ruin my every cheer...

Texting you the whole night,
Waiting for your replies…..
Becoming one despo in hope…
That you may recall me anytime….

Words have lost the path to my mouth….
I can’t force those up to you to tell….
Like my tongue is bound by some dark spell….
Tried everything to I knew,
To cut and loosen a bit……
So that I could get back my friend….
Who is trying hard to become a GIT…..

Pity I overcame, surrounded by a relation….
 While you’ve forgotten that embrace..
When you didn’t even use to have food…
Without a glance of my face……
I wish I could snatch What’s mine….
But I can’t even try it,
Coz you’re position at my heart is damn high….

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Skat A June 19, 2013 at 1:12 PM Jatin, CONGRATULATIONS in Russell's contest.... Luv~ SKAT Jatin Gauttam June 19, 2013 at 9:38 PM Did I win or what?? I don't know.. please tell me, Skat.

Skat A June 19, 2013 at 8:24 AM Hi Jatin, touch, and deep. , Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT Jatin Gauttam June 19, 2013 at 9:58 AM Hello Skat, and thanks for this prosper great wishes of yours. I am Jatin Gauttam, resident of India. I love writing poems, stories and lyrics... singing.... and being an Engineering student, i am sort of a geek. Now you can ask anything you wanna know about me ... Thanks for this welcome again.

Connie Gildersleeve June 19, 2013 at 2:50 AM Matin congratulation on your win. A great revision. Connie Jatin Gauttam June 19, 2013 at 9:56 AM Thanks a lot Connie.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 17, 2013 at 1:25 PM Hello Jatin - thanks for your first poem, I hope there will be more in the future. - Welcome to P-Soup - Have fun with poetry, share your thoughts and words here with us. - Welcome to read some of my poems. (give comment and get back) - Always nice with several new friends. - Good luck with your writing. - Have a great time here at P-Soup. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Jatin Gauttam June 19, 2013 at 9:55 AM Thank you Anne. I am looking forward for a conversation regarding sharing of ideas. Thanks again for this warm welcome.

Poet Destroyer A June 17, 2013 at 1:21 PM Very deep, and to have someone have a hold on you like that is powerful. I like the poem Jatin. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda Jatin Gauttam June 19, 2013 at 9:54 AM Thank you Linda. And I surely will consider it. Thanks again for this warm welcome.