Concealed By a Bramble Bush

Concealed by a bramble bush, 
Fixated to her tight swathe.
She takes a little look around,
Then peels off her clothes to bathe. 

Standing there with just a pink panty, 
 The small of back had perfect dimples.
She hesitated for a while in the cool breeze,
That kissed her skin to form goose pimples.

Hugging herself, she dipped a toe in the water, 
Then performs a shivery dance.
My eyes made love to her beauty,
My body succumbed to their romance.

She turned to the side as if walking a tight rope,
And skimmed the water surface with her foot.
I saw her perky mountainous breasts,
And almost let out a coyote’s crying woof.

A goddess, a picture, and artists dream,
Every man’s vision of heavenly thighs.
I stood unblinkabley mesmerised, 
Thinking “Thank you for my bramble bush disguise.”

This is how I met my second wife, Jane, by the way
And love her with the same passion as that very day
I found out later that she was the sister of Glen
Who is my close Imaginary friend


*I think I killed the end for you all :-)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/31/2011 6:48:00 AM
funny poem.... Jane is a real fantasy girl. Keep your thoughts off the stimulus plan or you will make a mountain out of a mole hill. ;}
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Date: 3/19/2011 5:33:00 AM
okay sid, you made your point.. i was pleasantly surprised with the ending! lol, from sentimental to ribauld--- amazing! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/18/2011 11:21:00 PM
Certainly an exciting write Sidney my friend.. dramatic to the end and full of passion.. OK to have imaginery friends.. makes life interesting luv.. happy weekend...
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Date: 3/18/2011 10:25:00 PM
lol you sure did silly.. but I expected that, you tend to twist things on us ;) thanks for the laughter early morning Sid.. love W
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