Concealed

Famine, death, hunger
All concealed by illusion
Of our selfishness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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April 26, 2015 at 3:14 PM
:)
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April 26, 2015 at 2:58 PM
William, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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April 26, 2015 at 1:32 AM
William, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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April 24, 2015 at 2:11 PM
William, this is deep for a senryu. I like it, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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April 24, 2015 at 11:56 PM
Thanks :) // William
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April 22, 2015 at 8:37 AM
- Hello William :)- I want to welcome you to the P-Soup - You have come to the right place, here you will find many talented poets :) - Share your work, try two get some "poets" friends :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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April 22, 2015 at 9:37 AM
Thank you :) -hugs // William
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