Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Verse

Comprehend

Comprehend 





The breeze at dawn has secrets to tell you,
               only if you have a mind !

                A redolence to perceive,
                 melody to comprehend,
            brush to the soul's eternal truth,
               beauty to an eye's content !






Written July 26th, 2015
© Dr. Upma A. Sharma
On line 7- Rumi
For contest "Complete six lines" by Nette

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James Tate July 27, 2015 at 9:43 AM I like your innuendos. Good job.

Theresa Cw July 26, 2015 at 11:19 PM Very poetic and quite a smart idea of emphasizing the second line!! Beautifully written. Good luck in the contest Dr. Upma

Jan Allison July 26, 2015 at 1:05 PM Beautifully penned Dr Sharma - i chose the same line - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Kp Nunez July 26, 2015 at 12:15 PM I like this, Dr. Upma, My favorite is line two......Kim :-)