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Melting Snowball

The technique of steadily decreasing the number of letters or syllables per word or line, or the number of words per line. Unlimited number of lines are allowed. No meter or rhyme required.


There's only one emotion that I feel is completely instinctual the spinoff peripheral feelings are subservient to that one and as sensual complex beings Man pursues its purity allowing wishes and fantasies to approach fulfilment fueled by trust you experience how happiness feels imbuing courage, it comforts a whimpering child no other feeling could possibly take its place it is the first commandment given by God and as close to heaven as mortals dare for futures rely on its foundations to support impossible dreams quenching an unquenchable thirst it refreshes you as two morph into one, bonded by a feeling we call love (Melting Snowball) Feb. 21, 2019

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Date: 2/27/2019 9:26:00 AM
"Man pursues its purity allowing wishes and fantasies to approach fulfilment" Bravo my friend!
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Date: 2/27/2019 1:38:00 PM
Thanks Caren, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/21/2019 9:22:00 PM
Well done, Emile.
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Date: 2/22/2019 7:24:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.