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Melting Snowball

The technique of steadily decreasing the number of letters or syllables per word or line, or the number of words per line. An unlimited number of lines are allowed. No meter or rhyme is required.

Completely Instinctual

There's only one emotion that I feel is completely instinctual spinoff peripheral feelings are thus subservient to that one and born complex sensual beings, Man pursues its purity allowing wishes and fantasies to approach fulfillment fueled by trust, you experience how happiness feels imbuing courage, it comforts a whimpering child no other feeling could possibly take its place it is the first commandment given by God and as close to heaven as mortals dare for futures rely on its foundations to support impossible dreams quenching an emotional thirst, it refreshes you as two morphs into one bonded by a feeling we call love (Melting Snowball) Feb. 21, 2019
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Krutsinger Avatar
February 27, 2019 at 9:26 AM
"Man pursues its purity allowing wishes and fantasies to approach fulfilment" Bravo my friend!
Pinet Avatar
February 27, 2019 at 1:38 PM
Thanks Caren, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
February 21, 2019 at 9:22 PM
Well done, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
February 22, 2019 at 7:24 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
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