Completely Instinctual

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Melting Snowball

The technique of steadily decreasing the number of letters or syllables per word or line, or the number of words per line. An unlimited number of lines are allowed. No meter or rhyme is required.

There's only one emotion that I feel is completely instinctual spinoff peripheral feelings are thus subservient to that one and born complex sensual beings, Man pursues its purity allowing wishes and fantasies to approach fulfillment fueled by trust, you experience how happiness feels imbuing courage, it comforts a whimpering child no other feeling could possibly take its place it is the first commandment given by God and as close to heaven as mortals dare for futures rely on its foundations to support impossible dreams quenching an emotional thirst, it refreshes you as two morphs into one bonded by a feeling we call love (Melting Snowball) Feb. 21, 2019

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