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I see your face in my mind as I walk away
Just seeing your smile brings sunshine to a cloudy day
Want to reach out want to be yours
Wish you could know how much I really adore 
You’re the prince in all my fairytale dreams
My heart’s so full it’s bursting at the seams
You are the one who completes my love story
You deserve all my love and glory
You’re always in my head, always there inside
The thing I wish is that you could also be on the outside

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Jen H.

Date: 10/14/2009 7:06:00 PM

Oh Alli, that little drummer boy had you hooked!!! Great poem, I could feel the truth in every line. Love ya, Jen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/22/2009 4:50:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Alli. I wish you the best in your future writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol