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Complete the Puzzle - Life Or Death


Life's pieces fit together, one by one.
Inserting them is challenging and fun,
For each shape adds to making of the whole;
Eventual completion is the goal.

Just like a puzzle, each piece falls in place.
Before our death, we must complete the race.
So many times, confront an empty space;
the hunt for proper shape we must embrace.

Our puzzle should be filled before life's pace
is done, for empty spots would then erase
the chance to bring completed goal to grace
that day we meet our Maker face to face.

Death dances dauntingly detecting done
ahead at bend that leads to our life's end,
when at that hour we meet the Lord with our
life's pieces fit together, one by one.


Sandra M. Haight

~3rd Place~
Contest: 4 x 4 Word Pairing Master Rhyme
Sponsor: Silent One
Theme Chosen: Life Or Death
Judged: 02/11/2016

FIRST STANZA
Acrostic with rhyme scheme: aabb. 
The first line in this stanza will be the last line in the 4th stanza.
SECOND STANZA AND THIRD STANZA
Mono rhymes - all the rhymes have to be the same. aaaa aaaa
FORTH STANZA
First line is alliteration and must rhyme with the fourth line: aa
Second and third line internal rhyme. bb bb (two rhymes per line)
Fourth line is the same as first line in the first stanza
There are no meter requirements in this contest.
However, I have used Iambic Pentameter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 8:37 AM
Thanks for the reply
Dutta Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 11:55 AM
Good Composition. Congrats Sandra to win. Anisha D
Haight Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 8:33 AM
Thank you, Anisha! Hugs, Sandra
Konos Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 6:26 AM
Sandra you have painted a masterpiece is my opinion...Congratulations ...once more..
Haight Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 8:33 AM
Thank you so much, Judy. It was challenging, and I appreciate your visit and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Gentry Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 5:49 AM
Congratulations on your win Sandra! I like how you did the 'puzzle' in with Life or Death theme. Cleverly done.
Haight Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 8:32 AM
Hi Susan, thank you so much for your visit, positive comment and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
A   Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 10:36 PM
SANDRA, CONGRATS, on your "pairing master rhyme, winning poem. **LINDA**
Haight Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 8:31 AM
Thank you, Linda. Hugs, Sandra
A. Sharma Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 9:21 PM
Very lovely.. congrats on ur great win with this awesome write Sandra.
Haight Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 8:31 AM
Thank you, Dr. Upma, for your nice comment and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Sergi Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 5:24 PM
Hi Sandra: Beautiful metaphoric answer to life and death in shapes. Congratulations!
Haight Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 8:29 AM
Thank you, Ralph. I appreciate your positive comments and congratulations. Sandra
Allison Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 4:41 PM
many congrats on your win Sandra :-) hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 2:37 PM
Thank you, Jan. Hugs, Sandra
Salehi Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 1:49 PM
Hi Sandra, William Shakespeare made a gigantic error in Hamlet, Act III, Scene I [To be, or not to be that is the question] the actual scene should have started as ( to be or to become, DEATH is the question). Nicely done....Cheers
Haight Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 5:03 PM
Hi Pashang, thank you so much for your visit to my poem and for your informative and supportive comments! Much appreciated. Sandra
Milliner Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 9:10 PM
Lovely!!
Haight Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 3:10 PM
Thank you so much, Sarita. Hugs, Sandra
Turner Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 3:22 PM
Well done. It is very challenging to say the least yet you have done it so gracefully. Good luck
Haight Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 3:08 PM
Thank you again for your visit and supportive comment, Daniel. I appreciate your positive feedback and good luck for the contest. Sandra
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