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Why so,
           as beauty grows old
charm ,becomes a scold

Why so,
           as strength fades away
stubborn pride,remains the day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Owens Avatar
November 18, 2009 at 9:49 PM
Thought provoking questions...enjoyed...Marty
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November 18, 2009 at 9:28 AM
Beauty and strength... beautiful poem and deep sentiment too... can always count on u Brian to provide a wonderful scenario of words to entertain as well as think.. bravo.. and thankxxx for your comments on Caravan.. my first ABC attempt.. probes a mind to find words that rhyme ....luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
Sheart Avatar
November 18, 2009 at 7:21 AM
Very intuitive Brian. Is this why they say you can't teach an old dog new tricks?, Smile. Many blessings to you Brian. Love Light Patricia
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November 18, 2009 at 5:29 AM
Good wisdom and insight in this one, Brian - Tm
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November 18, 2009 at 3:07 AM
Thought provoking questions. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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