Complaint

We walk in the rays of soft sunshine
That glow in the arms of love;
And never appreciate the blessings
God showers on us from above.
For I am feeling as I count them 
That we have more than we need;
And all we don't have are the angels
To bring heaven to earth indeed.

The winter brings long fire lit twilights
The spring brings a season of flowers
Summer brings all a sweet harvest
While fall brings the scent of sad hours.
The woods are alive with birdsong
A moon paints the waves of the sea;
The meadows are scented with clover
And all earth is as good as can be.

But people are full of such protest
Discontent is always their sad lot;
They forget so much has been given
And go whining for all they have not.
Instead of the light in the heavens
That shines on our day and our nights;
They look at the dirt on their feet
And forget all the earth’s delights.
They drink the wine that is sour
And never taste that which is sweet.
They moan for the thorn on the rose
Not heeding its scent so replete.

They don’t look at the garden of bloom
Precious blessings there without number;
They weep for what lies in the tomb.
Who lie in the arms of death’s slumber.
The error is ours to confess
They can’t find the way to go;
They close their eyes while the heart denies
That Eden is not theirs to know.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Johnson Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 3:28 PM
Spoken with the eyes of God. If we never look up all we'll see is the sod. I sure miss your poetry Elizabeth.
Loving Iii Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 8:21 AM
Brilliant
Johnson Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 3:23 PM
Should have been titled compliant. :) Youthful memories shine with delight. When angels danced in our minds at night. Naturally, we grow to see life. Some in pure bliss, some in pure strife. The answer to how we should live out each day. Is not our's to know, it's not our's to say. :)
Bickerstaffe Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 9:46 AM
'...they moan for the thorn on the rose.' There are the those who live in darkness and do not, or cannot, appreciate the light. Your piece is well titled. People should accept responsibility for their actions, and not try to transfer blame to others.
Loving Iii Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 6:28 AM
They just don't get it.
Mac Donald Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 12:20 PM
Oh, often we do take things for granted, Elizabeth.:( During careless moments of bliss, one might not realize they'd already reached the peaks of Eutopia. Much to contemplate in this write.:) Best wishes, Mikki :)
Peranteau Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 1:24 PM
Outstanding write dear poet ! This is deep....profound ! Thanx for this share Elizabeth ! Have a blessed week my friend....Much love, james
Minardi Avatar
April 3, 2012 at 8:53 AM
When we stop thinking and put aside all the hecticness, we would thankful of God has given us! A very deep meaning writing, Elizabeth. Me myself aware so much that I love to complain :)
Novotny Avatar
March 31, 2012 at 12:29 AM
You speak to one of mans' shortcomings without condemnation. That is quite the talent and gift. Thank you for sharing that with me. - Chuck
Chircop Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 10:33 AM
So much said here.A lot has been given to us for free..if only we could see.. Thanks for reminding me how much God loves the world,how much He loves us ,and the lot we are blessed-Charma :)
Horne Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 6:20 AM
Such a perceptive and beautiful write, Elizabeth
Babcock Avatar
March 20, 2012 at 10:38 AM
wow a remarkable write on this poem. Such beautiful imagery . love phyl
K. Avatar
March 19, 2012 at 1:01 AM
Hi Elizabeth! This sure is one loaded write and filled with such beautiful reminders about life and of how to live it.... very nice way of reminding us, thank you. I hope all is well with you! :)
Sumler Avatar
March 18, 2012 at 7:57 PM
Wowwwwwwwww Elizabeth this is one remarkable piece of poetry!!! You have so many wonderful lines of vivid beautiful imagery with an all to familiar theme of the greed and blind morals of mankind. Excellent entry!
Sweetheart Avatar
March 18, 2012 at 7:57 PM
captivating words and lines elizabeth and beautiful as always with its message to all readers.. so enjoyed and thankxx for your sweet comment too luv..
Minardi Avatar
March 17, 2012 at 9:19 AM
Remarkable writings Elizabeth. I love each stanza with their thoughts and message inside. Have a great weekend :)
Breidenthal Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 1:22 PM
This is a beautiful reminder to be thankful for what we have. Thanks for this - very inspiring and I am thankful that I was able to read it today. Always, Laura
Rhinem Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 9:58 AM
Smile ˜ Hi Baby, How Are You? ˜ How Is The Flag Flying Over There In Canada? ˜ Sending Sweeet Kisses, Sealed In A Red Rose Jar ˜ My Love, Always, John!:) *
Horne Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 5:02 PM
Love this piece, Elizabeth - beautiful, as I've come to expect from you : )
Effendi Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 1:01 AM
So very true, Elize. Your poem conveys a powerful message, in a magnificent manner. It is always a treat to read your work. I wish I were half as gifted as you. Take care my dear. P.S. I miss your email forwards!
Devnath  Avatar
March 14, 2012 at 12:28 PM
We always suffer for disobedience and complain if not got. Wonderful expression of truth. Loved always, bl
Kendrick Avatar
March 14, 2012 at 11:52 AM
Enjoyed reading this one that is a reminder of what we have in life..I am glad that I chose this one for its reminder to appreciate life..Thanks for stopping by, reading and commenting on my work..SAra
A   Avatar
March 14, 2012 at 11:02 AM
Liz, complaint is all we have..you did very beautiful... enjoyed stopping by...pd
Squyres Avatar
March 14, 2012 at 5:43 AM
Sadness and grief often make for good poetry, but it easily does consume us. Some reach for the unreachable "Eden" here on earth without realizing, it's just not there. Love, if and when found, may appear to be there Eden, untill reality sticks it's head out again. Wise words you've penned here...Enjoyed !!
Onclaud Avatar
March 14, 2012 at 4:12 AM
your lines gracefully slides on this page, lizzie.... yes, we forget the jewels of gratitude and your metaphors, images bring this to life.. a flowing piece!.. just lovely..:) huggs!
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