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Dizain
A dizain is a type of poem that follows a prescribed format of syllables per line while adhering to a certain rhyme scheme. A dizain should be comprised of a single 10-line stanza which includes 10 syllables in every line and is written in accordance with this rhyme scheme: ababbccdcd.

 

Some, like nothing better than to complain about allergies, sore backs, or slow lines. They stress out over and over again on anything from potholes to road signs. They seem to think that the sun never shines. I’m not a big fan of the bellyaching from people who find fault with everything. They remind me of the constant whining of babies chewing on a teething ring, when they’re not complaining, they’re reclining. (Dizain) 03/22/2020

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Date: 4/19/2020 8:40:00 PM
I fully agree with your message, Emile. Congrats on your dizain win today ~ John
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/20/2020 10:19:00 AM
Thanks John, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/19/2020 7:57:00 AM
Congratulations, And there are always those in the workplace. I Love you Dizain poem.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/19/2020 8:50:00 AM
Thanks JC, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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