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Dizain
A dizain is a type of poem that follows a prescribed format of syllables per line while adhering to a certain rhyme scheme. A dizain should be comprised of a single 10-line stanza which includes 10 syllables in every line and is written in accordance with this rhyme scheme: ababbccdcd.

 

Complain

Some, like nothing better than to complain about allergies, sore backs, or slow lines. They stress out over and over again on anything from potholes to road signs. They seem to think that the sun never shines. I’m not a big fan of the bellyaching from people who find fault with everything. They remind me of the constant whining of babies chewing on a teething ring, when they’re not complaining, they’re reclining. (Dizain) 03/22/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Watt Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 8:40 PM
I fully agree with your message, Emile. Congrats on your dizain win today ~ John
Pinet Avatar
April 20, 2020 at 10:19 AM
Thanks John, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Hawkens Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 7:57 AM
Congratulations, And there are always those in the workplace. I Love you Dizain poem.
Pinet Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 8:50 AM
Thanks JC, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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