David Fisher Poet Sijo

Compelling the Hand of God Visual 2

While we take pleasure in the glory of the Lord’s handiwork
Satin’s tireless henchmen seek prey in unlikely places
Compelling the hand of God to run his fingers over the earth


Visual 2  For Andrea's Sijo contest

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Skat A February 15, 2015 at 10:45 PM David, Awesome take, Congrats in Andrea's Sijo contest. -- SKAT

Sara Kendrick February 10, 2015 at 3:48 PM Interesting approach to the contest..Enjoyed reading this one..Congrats..Sara

Connie Marcum Wong February 10, 2015 at 12:39 AM Congratulations on your winning poem David. I really loved how you ended it in the last line. I gave it a 7

Jan Allison February 8, 2015 at 2:33 PM Dropping back with my congrats David:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux February 8, 2015 at 9:04 AM I think you have crafted an excellent piece.

Andrea Dietrich February 8, 2015 at 1:16 AM This is a great poem. I just don't usually go so much for the religious theme poems. Congrats in my contest. A well crafted poem.

Poesy Relish February 5, 2015 at 9:53 PM Beautiful and spiritual write!! Good luck for the contest David

M. L. Kiser February 5, 2015 at 3:01 PM So true...so true and a very well done Sijo. Good luck in the contest.

Laura Leiser February 4, 2015 at 5:16 PM Excellent poem, David! I enjoyed the spiritual concept of this very much.

Jan Allison February 4, 2015 at 5:04 PM OUTSTANDING David - I hope this flies for you in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx a 7 from me xxx