Compassion Ink

saddled burden of rude judgmental air,
lips soften, sprinkling humane affection.
holding hands, a heart unfolds compassion,
torrid tears shine, in oasis of care.


13th March 2020
10 syllables per line as counted in howmanysyllables
Sponsor	charles messina
Contest Name	Kind Ink |
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dietrich Avatar
April 18, 2020 at 1:20 PM
so touching. Congrats, Debjani.
Canerdy Avatar
April 18, 2020 at 12:00 AM
CONGRATS, Debjani--lovely, inspirational poem. Janice
Messina Avatar
April 17, 2020 at 8:14 PM
Beautiful poetry, Debjani. Very well done! Congratulations on your placement! Stay well and safe my friend.. Charlie
Gauthier Avatar
March 13, 2020 at 8:28 AM
Well done, Debjani.
Mitra Avatar
March 13, 2020 at 2:50 PM
Thanks , i feel elated with your compliment
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