Unseeking Seeker Poet Rhyme

Notes About The Poem

Comparisons

Comparisons made by ego
Negates our uniqueness
Let go now, oh hermit, let go
Entwine with That oneness

Choose tranquil quietude
God connect attitude
In blissful solitude 

Self-made prisons
Comparisons

21-October-2021
Quietus 

Notes: PS says ‘uniqueness’ has 4-syllables. HMS and we say 3. :-|

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Caren Krutsinger October 23, 2021 at 2:04 AM Love this "Let go now, oh hermit, let go Entwine with That oneness" especially the word hermit; it adds a certain "touch" that was needed. Unseeking Seeker October 23, 2021 at 6:41 AM Thanks Caren!

Robert James Liguori October 21, 2021 at 11:43 AM Unique quietus! Interesting and delightful read! Unseeking Seeker October 21, 2021 at 6:41 PM Thank you, Robert!