Comparisons
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Comparisons made by ego
Negates our uniqueness
Let go now, oh hermit, let go
Entwine with That oneness
Choose tranquil quietude
God connect attitude
In blissful solitude
Self-made prisons
Comparisons
21-October-2021
Quietus
Notes: PS says ‘uniqueness’ has 4-syllables. HMS and we say 3. :-|
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