Comparing Craziness

When you’re down in the dumps
And life’s giving you lumps,
It’s so nice to have lunch with a friend;
For occasional slumps,
Like a log’s many bumps,
Make it hard with a smile to pretend

All is dandy and fine.
Sometimes problems combine
With the natural ways that you cope
And your pal throws a line,
Which you take as a sign
That you’re not at the end of your rope.

So you sit and you eat,
Which itself is a treat,
And compare what’s been driving you nuts.
Though you do not compete,
Each admits to defeat
By not climbing up out of your ruts.

Still, a heaviness lifts,
One of friendship’s best gifts,
(Which can also take place on the phone).
Though the stuff that resists
Cheering up still exists,
You, at least, feel a lot less alone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Mcintosh Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 11:46 PM
So good. Just so good. A friend indeed
Rolland Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 4:54 PM
a good friend can ease your life, at any moment, sharing his problems, helps everyone, nicely written, enjoyed
Allison Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 4:04 PM
Getting out and sharing your troubles is just the tonic that you need Ilene, a change of environment and having a friend to talk to works wonders! hugs jan xx Hope you feel brighter now you have posted this poem and of course there is wimbledon to watch when you are home! hugs jan xx
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