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June 12,2007				
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With every hug I want you more.
With every goodbye it leaves me sore.
With every stare there’s the butterflies that dance.
And with every kiss there’s that sweet romance.
That I have dreamt of for so long.
I Cant see the way you look at me.
Only the way I want us to be.
I cant see the way you love me so.
All the questions simply answered with I don’t know.
I cant see your tenderness.
All I can do is to continue to dream of it.
You are blind to the way I love you.
You are helpless to the way I care.
You are useless to my tenderness.
And you are breathless to my love beyond compare.

By:Krystyna Luke
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Reinke Avatar
February 23, 2009 at 5:19 PM
like the last line alot...catherine
Parish Avatar
February 23, 2009 at 4:38 PM
I do see the comparison of how you feel compared to the way you think he feels. It makes a person almost feel lost. Nice write Krys
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