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Served chop suey Memories of your visit In the leftovers

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Date: 11/10/2012 1:28:00 AM
Well penned Rollo! The word 'leftovers' parallels 'memories' very well. Nice!
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Rollo West
Date: 11/10/2012 11:04:00 AM
Hi Vicky, thank you so much for stopping by and commenting Rollo
Date: 11/9/2012 3:31:00 PM
a nice piece - this would be lovely on a thanks for the dinner card!
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Date: 11/10/2012 11:05:00 AM
Thank you Ann for stopping in Rollo
Date: 11/9/2012 3:12:00 PM
It is posted so many good haiku poems today, this is one of those really good - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Rollo West
Date: 11/9/2012 3:25:00 PM
hi Anne, thank you for your great review, love it.

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