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Companion

Seen all the happiness, bliss and peace of mind, also witnessed pain, agony and suffering like blind. Blind! for I could not see, someone else suffered too, with life's terrible blee. The one who never gave up, for strong was his will, always directed the way, with suffering feel. When I shed tears, he was there to empathize, if he wouldn't have been there, i would have never rejoiced. When I asked, how can I repay for all suffering and pain i gave him, he made me realize, love is never to redeem, Gently seeing in my eyes, with silence and a humble smile without any error, my companion is no one besides the man in the mirror....... -'Panchi' Panchal Hitesh D.

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Date: 1/6/2014 4:15:00 PM
Hitesh, your poem flows perfectly. heartfelt. Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/7/2014 12:59:00 PM
Thank you Hitesh, Now I'm eager to read all you posted so far. sending SKAT HUGS
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Hitesh Panchal
Date: 1/7/2014 12:01:00 AM
i really appreciate your valuable comment, I have marked you as my fav poet reading you Dandelion Dream! thanks !
Date: 1/6/2014 2:19:00 PM
Hitesh, the best company is our own, ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Hitesh Panchal
Date: 1/7/2014 12:02:00 AM
certainly i would like to !! but prior let me understand this place !! a sort of newish here !!
Date: 1/6/2014 1:39:00 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Hitesh ! -Wisdom in your words - well written- Understanding - and love ! - Pleased to read your first poem. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck !! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Hitesh Panchal
Date: 1/7/2014 12:21:00 AM
thanks your poem lonely screams of pain is a worthy poemm

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